My walk home today was a steeplechase. The temperatures were above zero and there were puddles from the melted snow at every turn. The walk got me thinking about metaphors. Not only are they fun, but they’re powerful tools in writing that can help readers understand complex ideas and emotions. They help paint a picture when used to compare two things that are not alike but share some common characteristics.
We shouldn’t confuse metaphors, however, with similes. To me, a simile compares two things more directly, for example, “She sings like a lark.” The word “like” gives this simile away. Using “as” will also signal a simile.
Here are a few examples of some common metaphors.
Life is a journey. Life is full of ups and downs and twists and turns — a little like taking a road trip where we need to navigate the best we can.
The world is a stage. This metaphor compares the world to a stage, where people are actors playing their parts. It suggests that life is a performance and that we must play our roles to the best of our abilities.
Time is money. How often have you said that when pushing to get a job done? This metaphor compares time to money, where each has equal value. It suggests that you use your precious resource of time wisely.
Get on the ball. This is a baseball metaphor that means to be alert. Pay attention and be ready to react.
You can use metaphors in your writing for different reasons. For example, you can create vivid descriptions with the right metaphor, convey complex emotions, or make abstract ideas more concrete.
I recently heard someone describe a difficult situation as a “high-wire act.” I immediately understood what they were implying. After all, walking a high wire is not an easy task!
If you’re using a metaphor, it’s important to choose one that fits the context of your story and one that will resonate with the reader.
There are simple metaphors we use, like “My home is my castle.” You’ll also notice overused metaphors, like “It’s raining cats and dogs.” When a metaphor is over-used, it becomes a cliché. Or, is it an idiom??
Metaphors can add creativity to your writing or your day-to-day conversation. Have you made up some of your own? What’s your favourite metaphor?
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